This is an interesting song!
The sounds are well made and the beats works most of the time.
The drums are a bit to sharp at times. The drum kit could possibly be replaced to fit the beat better, especially in the most intense part around 03:00. But it is probably very hard to make it sound good using any digital drum kit since the drum samples overlap in an unnatural way.
The song is also a bit too repetitive. It could maybe have a softer part where the listener could relax since the song is very intense most of the time.
Overall: Good job! Do not be afraid to step even further out of the traditional music comfort zone.
Great song! Nice style!
You should use a DeEsser on the voice though. It gets a little too sharp at times.
Yeah, I'm noticing that. I actually did use a de-esser, and it sounded fine in my headphones and speakers, but it's crazy bad in my car.
It's a nice beat, and you used some unexpected soundeffects in the transitions which makes it interesting to listen to. The soundeffects are very well made but at some places it's sounds like they are placed ontop of the song instead of interacting with it.
It's very enjoyable to listen to
thank you very much mate, im still working in it
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